Saturday, 19 April 2025

Audenic Apophthegms

These little pieces all use the tanka form. To be clear, these are my thoughts, not Auden's, deriving from rereading Humphrey Carpenter's biography and picking up on certain themes. Sometimes I use some of Auden's or Carpenter's words (I think). In the first stanza of "In a Nutshell," "NYT" is the New York Times: replace with the Guardian if you wish!
   On 7 June 2017 I posted a short series called "Epigrams." I was hoping to write more but decided I wasn't very good at them. You can read the series here.

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(After rereading “W. H. Auden, A Biography” by Humphrey Carpenter)

Faith without dogma
Is soda water sans gas;
Vague uplift, stale buns.
All should be pleasant, but who,
Come shove, will die for the Lord?

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“Intensity of
Attention:” hushed at his desk,
Daily the poet
Or statesman strive: but what if
The tyrant likewise? Watch out!

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“Spain” was prescriptive
Nonsense: poetry does not
Insist what to do;
Though by quizzing good and bad
It lauds virtue, which then prompts.

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Inner order, not
Outward look, was key; therefore
Scruff clothes, hair – so what?
But late life, his inner self
Froze: now parody, he died.

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John Pudney made note:
The Thirties Auden, Britten,
Lived in a world which
“Closed certain doors to strangers:”
Oh, would that were still the case!

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Men kill, cheat, rape, fight:
That’s accident not essence
Claim some. No, man fell,
Evil’s the fruit: he’ll fester
Till he say, “Maranatha.”

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In a Nutshell

There are three stages
(Thus Kierkegaard): aesthetic –
Swoon, my precious words!
Ethical – NYT types
Rainbow dress their only child;

Religious – those two
Having failed. Hopeless, helpless,
Man must leap: if not,
Despair will kill; guilt-engulfed,
Reason falls: faith must suffice.

Surrendered thus, man
Chooses himself (indeed yes!)
Oned with the Fontal
Of self – true autonomy
That’s fulfilled in dependence.

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That sneaked slice of cake,
That thug flitching his crime-mate,
The jobsworth quibbling:
All by their nay-deeds illume
The Way, the strait gate they’ll miss.

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Magnate, nabob, toff,
Jewelled, wined, cigars like cudgels,
Even they (more so
Perhaps) know life’s a mud-fight,
Its goods slip-handed like eels.

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In an online world
Surfing for self’s approvings,
He ersatzed a brand:
Celebed, pulp-washing his “pitch,”
He monetized his each word.

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Globalled, we’re one world,
(Lick it up!), deemed to bring joy;
In fact, discouraged
From preferring what’s local,
We’re snappish, all are lonely.

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Well, art is small beer;
At end, what’s necessary
Is making one’s crust,
Giving not taking, and then –
Hard this! – loving one’s neighbour.

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The poet’s duty
Is to caress the language,
And that’s done by rules:
Poets are craftsmen, builders,
Not “free verse” ragbag merchants.

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“The Lord be with you,”
“And very much with you too.”
Please! Worship is cult,
Holy awe at what’s Other:
It’s Truth, not self-lauding hugs.

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Words weighed in the scale:
Meaning, quantity, rhythm –
Then sentence and whole:
That’s the poet’s task: it grows
From rigorous schooling, stripes!

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