Wednesday 8 May 2019

Forewarning

A milk-like gleam through the window this morn
   Suggested that, night-deep, the snow had fallen;
Rising, I peered through the curtains half-drawn
   At the morning gloom like a bruise blue-swollen.

The air was frigid round my pyjama’d legs,
   The window glass wore a cataract of frost;
Outside, the garden’s winter stubs and pegs
   Were mounded with snow beneath an icy crust.

And no bird sang, no cat or fox prowled,
   Only the snowflakes jettisoned down,
A struck silence in which my breathing toiled
   Knit gloom and snow in a veil on the town.

Chastened, shivering, I went back to my bed
   Sunk in the darkness of the night-musted room;
A crow croaked once and a hiss of wind said,
   “This snow is your pall, that bed your tomb.”

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© February 2015

Monday 6 May 2019

To A Niece

An object lesson. When writing this I was aware of the risk that it might end up too close to W.B. Yeats for comfort, but despite my best efforts that is what happened. As poets sometimes report, the writing took control and the poet followed behind. The final stanza is very Yeatsian although it says what I wanted to say. To try and introduce my own voice a little more, at revision time I wrote an alternative final two lines, given below, although to my mind they do not say as much as my original ending. Readers can choose at will!

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   And from the blue a Christmas card
   From one unheard of these few years:
A niece long settled with her own backyard,
A spouse and child and all that makes for joy;
   I sent a gift that those young ears
Might perk at talk of unexpected treats,
That busy hands might play with rapt employ
   Or busy teeth devour some sweets!

   What thin-hairs uncle does not pause
   To offer pert advice to those
Who daily cope? And yet there’s truth in saws:
Hence, scorn those couples who in swoon parade
   A single chick whose doge-like nose
Crumples in squall should it due homage lack;
   Such a one will spoil nor be afraid
Years hence to shun its parents with its back.

   Households should be agog with young
   Jostling at the parental knee
That blood might bind and nuance of the tongue
Teach fortitude and love which none can shake;
   And Albion too: that it be free,
Surplus of the young like gulls in the nest
Must be, that spreading white-plumed wings they rake
The cliffs and sea, in ardour dressed.

   Already, passage birds in hordes
   Have settled coasts, the plains and urbs,
Their parti-coloured garbs and chattered gauds
Creating cantons where native writ is shunned.
   Their umma of aggressive verbs,
Their brute simplicity and gross élan,
   Will cow the shires; outbred and dunned
All will tug forelock to the musselman.

   So, laud those ancient ways and means
   Which island-wide cohered a state:
Cathedral bells which catechized rough thegns,
Parley of men and monarch, binding shires,
   Later, the factories in spate,
That liberty and common law hold sway;
Career-entwined or sib at household fires
   Be blessed, for what you wish you may.

   Disdain, though, gender politics
   Which, glib, would cauterize your womb;
For Sapphism is sterile, like dust in attics,
Whilst between the sexes there’s a rich cohesion –
   She with her grit and mother’s bloom,
He the provider, beating bounds at night,
   Children the fruit: balk with unreason
And all’s a garden blanched with lust and spite.

   Like well-fed seedlings, soon your child
   A bright-haired, fresh-face girl must grow.
Harsh winds will knock her; sheikhs by hajj beguiled
Will thrust hijabs that a pious fate be hers.
   Give thanks that Albion’s blood shall flow
Through her; time-ripened, fitly-wed, may she
Bear sons who soil and history rehearse
   And saints, warriors or statesmen be.

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© February 2015

Alternative ending:

Bear sons who soil and memory rehearse
   That they our history may be.